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Mordheimer

Posts: 3076 Join date: 2009-07-12 Age: 36 Location: Cape Coral, FL
 | Subject: Re: TRLB v0.4.4: Notes for next revision Sun Feb 28, 2010 9:06 pm | |
| | da bank wrote: | Page 105, 106, Who Can Hire: "Imperial Guards, Catachan Jungle Fighter Regional Platoon Only" and "Imperial Guards, Death Korps of Kreig Regional Platoon only."
Are we saying all the IG platoons or those specifici ones? |
Imperial Guards are no longer an individual entry, but subdivided by Regional Platoons. The proper way to refer to Catachans is "Imperial Guard, Catachan Jungle Fighters". I see where this can create 'issues' with some people. It will be changed, to reflect the Zero-FAQ policy. The entry should read "Imperial Guard Catachan Jungle Fighter Regional Platoon Only" to emphasize that this is one thing. Suggestions welcomed.
| da bank wrote: | | Page 33, 5th paragraph, Grenades, "Regardlesss of how the weapon............are within Line of Sight" Do we want to include "Initiative Range" in this as if you test and are witin Initiative Range you would not need LOS and someone could argue that. | This is a matter to discuss. The issue refers also to grenades launched with Grenade Launchers... which is up to 18", way pass anyone Initiative Attribute. Having ALSO an "Initiative Range" is an interesting concept, but usually if you are out of LoS, the enemy maybe behind a wall.
| da bank wrote: | | Page 45, 6 paragraph, 2nd column, "The best way to .........................can cause problem is to think of a fighter..." Something is missing "can cause many problems" or something else, it seems wordy. | Fixed. The section now reads: "The best way to illustrate how this situation can cause problems is to think of a fighter using a tipped over wooden rectangular table as cover."
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Da Bank

Posts: 1225 Join date: 2009-07-29
 | Subject: Re: TRLB v0.4.4: Notes for next revision Sun Feb 28, 2010 9:15 pm | |
| Correct, the grenade launcher is a more unique item than a grenade so it does offer a chance to clarify. |
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Da Bank

Posts: 1225 Join date: 2009-07-29
 | Subject: Re: TRLB v0.4.4: Notes for next revision Sat Mar 13, 2010 11:56 pm | |
| Did we put the template page for the flamer and blast and ordiance template in for version 5.0? |
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Mordheimer

Posts: 3076 Join date: 2009-07-12 Age: 36 Location: Cape Coral, FL
 | Subject: Re: TRLB v0.4.4: Notes for next revision Sun Mar 14, 2010 3:35 am | |
| Damn it! I keep forgetting! Thanks... will put it on the list. _________________ . The Mordheimer - Death Squads' Chief Editor & Ninja Designer. Support Bacteria; it is the ONLY culture some people have! . |
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Da Bank

Posts: 1225 Join date: 2009-07-29
 | Subject: Re: TRLB v0.4.4: Notes for next revision Sun Mar 14, 2010 10:14 pm | |
| I noticed that in the "Walking"section it talks about the -1 to BS if the model takes a normal Movement but I didn't see that in the shooting section.
It might be nice to have it listed in the Shooting section also to reinforce the point and for quick viewing or research of it. |
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Mordheimer

Posts: 3076 Join date: 2009-07-12 Age: 36 Location: Cape Coral, FL
 | Subject: Re: TRLB v0.4.4: Notes for next revision Sun Mar 14, 2010 10:58 pm | |
| | da bank wrote: | I noticed that in the "Walking"section it talks about the -1 to BS if the model takes a normal Movement but I didn't see that in the shooting section.
It might be nice to have it listed in the Shooting section also to reinforce the point and for quick viewing or research of it. |
Done!_________________ . The Mordheimer - Death Squads' Chief Editor & Ninja Designer. Support Bacteria; it is the ONLY culture some people have! . |
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StyrofoamKing

Posts: 598 Join date: 2009-11-02 Age: 26 Location: Fairfax, VA, USA
 | Subject: Re: TRLB v0.4.4: Notes for next revision Tue Mar 16, 2010 6:33 am | |
| Hmm... just noticed something. A lot of places in the book, you use the word "maybe", when it really should be "may be", two separate words. I can start giving you set pages, though a simple "find" search on your own might be faster. |
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Mordheimer

Posts: 3076 Join date: 2009-07-12 Age: 36 Location: Cape Coral, FL
 | Subject: Re: TRLB v0.4.4: Notes for next revision Tue Mar 16, 2010 10:48 am | |
| MY FAULT.
I will do a find. I have been trying to fix 'em... they may all be, but you are 100% right.
HEY! Stop with the newpaper!!! I yield! _________________ . The Mordheimer - Death Squads' Chief Editor & Ninja Designer. Support Bacteria; it is the ONLY culture some people have! . |
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Mordheimer

Posts: 3076 Join date: 2009-07-12 Age: 36 Location: Cape Coral, FL
 | Subject: Re: TRLB v0.4.4: Notes for next revision Thu Mar 18, 2010 12:26 am | |
| updated _________________ . The Mordheimer - Death Squads' Chief Editor & Ninja Designer. Support Bacteria; it is the ONLY culture some people have! . |
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Da Bank

Posts: 1225 Join date: 2009-07-29
 | Subject: Re: TRLB v0.4.4: Notes for next revision Sun Mar 21, 2010 9:12 am | |
| Can we add stood up with "Injuries" that starts on page 45. Even though not an injury people will be looking for the "Stood Up" modifiers and they are buried under another section.
Is a Psyker affected by the "Stood Up" rule? |
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Mordheimer

Posts: 3076 Join date: 2009-07-12 Age: 36 Location: Cape Coral, FL
 | Subject: Re: TRLB v0.4.4: Notes for next revision Sun Mar 21, 2010 7:51 pm | |
| I think this could be a nice topic of debate on the Experimental Rules section. That way you can explain what you have in mind.  _________________ . The Mordheimer - Death Squads' Chief Editor & Ninja Designer. Support Bacteria; it is the ONLY culture some people have! . |
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Da Bank

Posts: 1225 Join date: 2009-07-29
 | Subject: Re: TRLB v0.4.4: Notes for next revision Sun Mar 21, 2010 8:31 pm | |
| Ok for the second part in experimental rules but how about the 1st part. It seems "stood" up in only listed in one section of the book (can't remember which one) either shooting or combat and one must go retrace their steps to find the modifers for Stood UP. |
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Da Bank

Posts: 1225 Join date: 2009-07-29
 | Subject: Re: TRLB v0.4.4: Notes for next revision Sun Mar 21, 2010 9:07 pm | |
| Page 41
Sixth paragraph
4 line in paragraph
The attacker do not required.......
Change to: The attacker is not required or does not have to.... |
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Mordheimer

Posts: 3076 Join date: 2009-07-12 Age: 36 Location: Cape Coral, FL
 | Subject: Re: TRLB v0.4.4: Notes for next revision Mon Mar 22, 2010 6:13 am | |
| Fixed _________________ . The Mordheimer - Death Squads' Chief Editor & Ninja Designer. Support Bacteria; it is the ONLY culture some people have! . |
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Da Bank

Posts: 1225 Join date: 2009-07-29
 | Subject: Re: TRLB v0.4.4: Notes for next revision Sat Mar 27, 2010 10:43 pm | |
| Imperial Guard
Page 159 2nd paragraph.
Among those many billions.......to change the fate of their fellows. Change to ...to change the fate for their fellow Imperial citizens.
Page 160 1st paragraph. Maybe we should restate that HG and SC do not count against squad size.
Page 161 last paragraph
Every plant is poisonous, making foraging impossible. ADD: ...foraging nearly impossible.
Page 162 Paragraph 2 It is home to the renowned Catachan............ Change to: The planet Catachan is renowned for the Catachan Jungle fighter regiments of the Imperial Guard.
Page 162 Paragraph 2 jungle warfare in the entire galaxy, and their..... Put a period at end of Galaxy and get rid of "and their reputation preceeds them" That sentece was very long.
Page 162 Jungle Terrain Camoflage
but experience Officers have learned experiened officers have....
Same Paragraph as above: maximize the use of this terrain even more. maximize the use of terrain more effectively.
Jungle Terrain Camoflage.....Note something at the bottom "Attempt to discuss terrain and what "counts as" before the game starts.
Page 164 Entrenchment Paragraph 6 We might need to clarify that the recruits must be in cover as 3" away a recuit not be in cover but RAW would go contrary to what we intended.
Do you think we need to specify in teh Selecting this Regional Platoon that minus 100 only gives you 600 to spend? I know someone will ask.
Page 165 1st paragraph
"Tons" No capital "T" needed.
Some spots are WORDY but this is how most of the GW fluff reads. Don't know if we want to go back and try to fix so it is 100% grammatically correct or leave as this is how most GW product is completed.
I need to reread again as when I read I get it and I could be assuming everyone gets it and maybe they won't as we notice with the questions. Those questions are great as it helps us pinpoint what is not rock solid as our goal from a long long time ago is to prevent a FAQ if at all possible and we have pretty much cleared that hurdle. |
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